Stasis: Chapter 22

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 08:27:42 PST

Ok so I think someone copied me a little but oh well that shit happens;) of course you send Leo to go get something, it's not like he's never running late for anything she couldn't have been suspicious but leave to David and Bianca to give it away. Yes David's vows win, but Erica's were nice too this chapter was, let's say nice but of course I'm waiting for the next part I guess I should get working on my own special chapter for you but it won't posted until I get another flashdrive or when i go to my moms and use a disc. More please

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 12:36:09 PST

K, so a little explaination why I did what I did. LOL! I don't like to do tradition vows with them, it doesn't seem to fit. And they usually end up to sticky sweet for D&E. So I wanted to do something a little different. I think I achieved what I was going for, even if it does get a bit sappy in places. LOL! I didn't have them mention Carter either, but do mention him throughout the wedding, because I wanted the vows and the ceremony to be abotu them. To be about what they survived. How they got to that point; how their loved lasted long enough to create that little guy. I hope I them justice.

Chapter 22

Despite everything, they'd still managed to make it to City Hall just before 10 o' clock. Well, David, Erica, Carter and Bianca had, Leo was missing in action. Though, neither Bianca...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (LostXphile) — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 02:49:52 PST

I loved the fight. It was true to character yet it was fair to both characters. It wasn't over the top but still full of emotion. Thanks for a great chapter!

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 15:12:18 PST

LOL, the magical chapter appearing was doing. I have to break them up because it was to long. And I guess I wasn't fast enough. LMFAO They had to have the fight, I mean, come on, the mere thought the could have even felt half of what he feels for her would have drove Erica nuts. And David knowing she slept with Ass? Ah. Of course Carter saved the day!

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 15:07:36 PST

I'm not sure what happened there. I came to this thread and then I saw the little new post thing and read that, when Anna came to the door but then I went to post a review and the fight just appeared out of nowhere so I had to read that! Ugh! Whatever, it's like they needed to have that fight because jus saying yeah I don't care was a bunch of BS and it's always about Erica and how men I.e David always hurt her. I think she might be a bit crazy to think that David loved Anna while she was away, but then she has a right to be pissed that someone fell in love with him. But then he has every right to be angry because of what Jack is to Erica and what sex means to her. She only puts out for love and putting out for Jack meant something more to her than any lunch date would. Da my favorite word in the chapter <3. Ah ready for more

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 14:37:05 PST

David nodded, flicking his eyes from the box on the table, and back to Erica, "That was nice of her. We'll go through it when we get back," He offered with a smile, "I can't wait to see more of you when you were pregnant," He teased hoping to draw her out of whatever the hell mood she was in. He didn't like the idea of her mad or upset normally, but this was the wedding day, and he wasn't going to stand for it.

"Yesterday," She started, cutting straight through the tension and doubt he was facing ,wanting this out and in the open before they waked down the aisle, "when you came to the police station, you were coming to pick Anna up for lunch."

He nodded, "You already knew that."

"Where were you taking her?" She asked softly, her eyes finally meeting his.

"What?" He asked, shaking his head at her, "What's going on?"

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Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 14:34:38 PST

Bwhaha, and just when you thought they'd ride off into the sunset and live happily ever after.

Chapter 21

"Coming," Erica Kane yelled at whomever was ringing the doorbell. Didn't whomever it was know that she was in the midst of feeding her hungry little man so they could finally head down to City Hall. There wasn't time for any of this; they'd had to wait to long as it was.

Carter babbled in her arms, his chubby legs kicking against her hips as he protested the interruption of his breakfast.

Erica laughed lightly, smiling down at him as she headed for the door, "You definitely have your father's lack of patience."

He let out a hard babble and flayed some more, eyes fixing on the door as his mommy pulled it open.

"Hi," The woman on the other side offered with a...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 12:40:27 PST

Haha, so this chaper, it's pretty much just fluff. As will be the wedding and the smut that follows. But as always, there is a method to my madness...and more often then not, not something happy. LOL! Trust me, I would never do anything terrible to them.

Chapter 20

"David's right," Bianca breathed as she helped Erica fasten her dress, "red is definitely your color."

Erica smiled into the mirror and back at her daughter as she settled the diamond pendant David gave her all those months ago, back before either of them had realized that they'd already fallen in love, perfectly around her neck. She wore the charm b bracelet he gave her, as well. Wanting him to know that she was his. She'd taken off her engagement ring...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 20:24:54 PST

I am required by law to write a review to all chapters read on this site......
Like I told you earlier, one of the best chapters if not the best chapter in this fic
I don't know if it is because it is happy D&E or if it is because it's David and Carter for the first time...
Or it could be that this is how my fic is going

Any way I am waiting for the next chapter and I know what it is and my next chapter will be the same if I put it in this chapter or if this next chapter is a filler I don't know yet. I guess I will decide in a few since I am going to write it now

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 13:04:47 PST

Chapter 19

Neither of them had any idea what time it was and neither could honestly say that they cared. They'd managed to make it to their bedroom at some point and had made love until they couldn't move anymore. They knew there was a world going on outside and that there was much to discuss, but neither wanted to move from their bed.

David was laying on his back, wearing nothing both his boxers and Erica, if you wanted to count the fact that she was wearing nothing more then a t-shirt and was sprawled out on top of him.

"Can we stay here forever," She asked, eyes fluttering closed as she felt the soft beating of his heart under cheek.

"I have no problem with that," He blew back, his words low and rough, as he ran his finger through her hair, "though I would like to have a few minutes with my son."

She didn't have to look up at him to...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 14:40:14 PST

Dirty dirty whores those two are against the door! What if Bianca came downstairs for something? Oh well what Erica wants, Erica gets! That was a pretty hot reunion if I do say so myself and I don't think they minded either! LMAO

Waiting for some David/Carter, Thank You....

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 14:08:27 PST

Chapter 18 is posted. Though it's smut, so it's locked up. LOL! Come on really, did you think I wouldn't go there? If you don't have access, what the hell are you waiting for? I think the porn is well deserved in this fic. There's David and Carter in the next chapter so don't miss that either.

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 14:05:51 PST

Oh come on, like you really believed I wouldn't go there at some point? Hope you like and hope it was worth the wait.

Chapter 18

Her eyes slid up to meet his and he looked back at her.

Their gaze was hot and intense; desperate and raw. He didn't move and neither did she.

"I," David blew out after a few seconds, "I didn't know," He words were low rough as they pushed out of his throat, "I didn't know," He repeated softly shaking his head; needing her to know that he was telling the truth; that none of his was what he wanted.

She blew out soft a breath and her eyes fluttered as she nodded, "I know," She gasped, taking a step toward him, "Oh god, I know," She blew out through a tear filled gasp the million different emotions she'd had boiling inside for...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Mon, 31 Aug 2009 19:00:23 PST

So David was MIA until the last line of the chapter...but they talked about him it was like he was in the chapter too!
Oh Jack how big of you to come confess to Erica. That is something to be proud of but betraying D&E like that cancels it all out! I can't wait for the next D&E confrontation, dare I say it will be hot???

Thanks Ky it's closer to that day...safe travels and happy writing!

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Mon, 31 Aug 2009 09:25:04 PST

Part II

"I can't believe this," Bianca breathed through a smile, from where she sat on the floor in front of Carter, who was all smiles and happiness as he played with his sister.

Erica nodded, tears welling in her eyes as she watched the sight before her. She'd dreamt of this moment too, of Bianca with her brother, the two of them enjoying each other's company. She'd almost been overwhelmed by emotion when she and Bianca had been reunited a year of missed moments and unmade memories exploding into hard and fast tears. Now though, they'd have a long talk, and a good cry and were well on their way to catching up.

Bianca had also helped to re-enforce that David had no idea that Carter had existed. She'd told him how David had struggled while she was gone. Loosing himself in alcohol, withdrawing from the world; pushing away from the ones he loved.

Her heart...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 09:01:16 PST

I am glad Anna fessed up and now David knows and he is well, PISSED! Jack better watch himself now that Dr. Dave knows his secret..LOL Now its time for Erica to find out and than D&E can be happy D&E for EVER

I am so waiting for is it part II or chapter 18? Can't wait, too bad another country is calling your name. Oh well I got lots of AMC shit to watch until you get the next chapter up so, whenever is fine...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 08:22:32 PST

Chapter 17

Part 1

"I didn't think you were coming," Anna breathed, eyes on David as he finally appeared in the doorway of the evidence room.

"I need to go talk to Erica," He told her, his voice laced with confusion and frustration. Twenty minutes ago he'd come to the PVPD to meet Anna for lunch, and instead was reunited with the love of his life, who had bore him a son he had no idea even existed.

Anna nodded, motioning him inside, "That's why I asked you here."

Hr raised a curious eyebrow in her direction, "I don't understand."

"You're not supposed to," She told him, motioning to the evidence box she'd placed on the table in the middle of the room.

"Anna," He forced out through a hard...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 20:33:58 PST

I don't know if I was supposed to but I loved this chapter! Poor David, she tells him this cute little baby is his and he is like WTF and she is like You Bastard! Thanks again to the wonderful D.A. J***ASS. Oh well they will make it all up soon I hope..

P.S. you need to review my chapter, I mean I wrote it for you,,,,

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:53:10 PST

Chapter 16

"Welcome home, Ms. Kane," The PVPD police force grinned, nodding as they welcomed her back to Pine Valley.

The PVPD was walking on air as they basked in their victory against the Proteus organization. Vanessa was still at large, but they'd managed to capture enough of her goons to stop operations in North America; and they were seeing international progress as well.

Jackson, Derek and Anna finally felt like it was safe to bring Erica back to Pine Valley. She and Carter had arrived back in Pine Valley and were whisked down to the PVPD for questioning and a debriefing.

Carter was charming the entire staff with his bright eyed smile. At eight months old he already seemed to have a good read on people and was doing his best to win over everyone the came in contact with.

"When can I go home?" She asked, eyes on Jack and Anna. Carter was in his...

Re: Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (drdavidfan2) — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 08:38:22 PST

So now I don't know if I can ever speak of his name! it will either be **** or *******. I tried to force it out even with an ASS at the end but I can't. Maybe I could just use ASS even though that is such a similar nickname I have a hard time typing it. Erica it's not your fault girl, you got played and he will pay I have a feeling that in a matter of a chapter you will be home

Stasis: Chapter 22

feeds@yuku.com (DandEfan) — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 14:03:18 PST

Just so that everyone knows what the title means, the definition of Stasis is: A condition of balance among various forces; motionlessness: "Language is a primary element of culture, and stasis in the arts is tantamount to death" (Charles Marsh).

Introduction

"I wish you'd let me come with you," David sighed, shaking his head as leaned forward to take a damp washcloth from Erica's forehead.

"Why so you can listen to Joe tell me that I have the flu," She tossed back at him, trying to keep her tone firm despite the teasing smile that played at the edge of her lips.

"I'm sorry if I'm worried," He teased shaking his head at her, "You're only my fiancée. It's only seven days before we leave for Rio to get married and you haven't been out of bed in three days."

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